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Client testimonials and portfolio for published books edited by Rachel Daven Skinner

I'm proud to say that 90% of my published editing clients are repeat clients, 81% of their books are ranked 4.5 stars or higher on Amazon, and 100% are ranked higher than 4 stars. Yes, really!
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Testimonials

book cover for Very Wicked Things by Ilsa Madden-Mills, a book edited by Romance Refined editor Rachel Daven Skinner. Book cover shows a young woman in a dress and high heels sitting on the ground holding ballet slippers
​"Rachel has the uncanny ability to critique your work yet give you the confidence you need to make it better. Her editorial letter was the best, full of detailed examples on how to improve my plot, character goals, and motivations. Without her guidance, I'd still be crying over how to fix my pesky flashbacks. Because of her, my novel is exactly how I envisioned it. Easy and personable, I'm thrilled that we met through my manuscript, and I hope to call her friend for a long time to come."
--Ilsa Madden-Mills
​​NYT, USA Today, and WSJ and Amazon bestselling author

book cover for The Promise by A.B. Michaels, a book edited by Romance Refined editor Rachel Daven Skinner. Book cover shows an embracing couple and a tent city

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​"Rachel is thoughtful, thorough and completely in tune with what a well- constructed story looks like. She can handle both structural and line edits with ease. She will tell you what's working and, in as kind a manner as possible, tell you what's not. Her input is invaluable to me."
--A.B. Michaels

book cover for Rising Tides by Katy Haye, a book edited by Romance Refined editor Rachel Daven Skinner. Book cover shows a black background and transparent letters for the title which reveal a girl's face through the lettering


​"Rachel's edits are superb, love working with her on my books. I would of course recommend her if anyone asked for a recommendation, although selfishly I don't want her to get too busy and be unable to fit me in!"
--Katy Haye

Book cover for Dirty English by Ilsa Madden-Mills, a book edited by Romance Refined editor Rachel Daven Skinner. Image of a man's very muscular back as he faces a dirty British flag.
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"Professional, hardworking, dedicated, thorough, and the best!"
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--Ilsa Madden-Mills
​NYT, USA Today, and WSJ and Amazon bestselling author

book cover for The Depth of Beauty by A.B. Michaels, a book edited by Romance Refined editor Rachel Daven Skinner. book cover shows a woman's back, bare except for a strand of black pearls trailing down to her tailbone. A Chinese building is in the background
​"Rachel is a superb editor whose expertise extends far beyond romance-related fiction elements. She will tell you, kindly, if your writing isn't working, explain why, and offer ideas to help get you back on track. Better yet, she can take your good story and suggest ways to make it exceptional. After receiving her input and getting your draft to reflect your very best effort, she'll drill down even further and show you, line by line, how you can create a still more rewarding experience for the reader. No matter which genre you are writing in, Rachel will improve your work tremendously."
--A.B. Michaels

book cover for Impossible Things by Kate Johnson, a book edited by Romance Refined editor Rachel Daven Skinner. Book cover shows a close-up of a woman's face surrounded by a purple shawl. She has tattoos around one eye.



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Impossible Things would not have been the same without you! I genuinely loved working on it with you.”
--Kate Johnson

book cover for The Reluctant Bride by Beverley Eikli, a book edited by Romance Refined editor Rachel Daven Skinner. Book cover shows a woman in a ballgown standing in front of elaborate English gardens and a manor house in the distance
"I've had such wonderful help ... from my editor, Rachel Skinner. ... She's been great. [When] she sent me my edits for The Reluctant Bride there were lots of them but they were spot on, echoing as they did a vague disquiet I had about certain aspects, such as timeline, coincidences and the need in one or two areas to subtly erase the perception that my hero was just a little too patient with my heroine to be believable.  ... Getting the timeline right was a nightmare I might not have stumbled through had Rachel not been so enormously clear and concise on where I needed to tweak."
--Beverley Eikli, quoted from her blog here and here

book cover for The Wedding Diary by Margaret James, a book edited by Romance Refined editor Rachel Daven Skinner. Book cover shows a drawing of whimsical butterflies aglow.


"Thank you, lovely editor, who saw what needed to be done and tactfully showed me how. You haven't tried to rewrite the book yourself, which some editors do, and this is a nightmare for authors. You're a great editor and I'll look forward to working with you again."
--Margaret James

book cover for Hubble Bubble by Jane Lovering, a book edited by Romance Refined editor Rachel Daven Skinner. Book cover shows a drawing of a witch's cauldron surrounded by objects for a spell



"It was an absolute pleasure to work with you on Hubble Bubble. You are a treasure of an editor, and I very much hope I'll be working with you again soon, you lovely person, you."
--Jane Lovering

Portfolio

Please note that I also edit for authors before they submit to agents and publishers, and those projects may never be made public here in my portfolio.
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Book cover for A Dash of Romance by Paulett Golden, a Regency romance edited by Romance Refined editor Rachel Daven Skinner. Image of a gentleman in Regency period clothing staring at the viewer with a kind expression on his face.
A Dash of Romance
Paulett Golden

Regency Romance
Self-pub Jul 2020

​Hired by author for copyediting

4.5 stars at amazon.com

Book cover for Freeing Luka by Victoria Aveline, a sci-fi romance edited by Romance Refined editor Rachel Daven Skinner. Image of a muscular man's bank covered in swirling tattoos with his hands bound behind his back.
Freeing Luka
Victoria Aveline

​Sci-fi Romance
Self-pub Jul 2020

​Hired by author for copyediting

4.5 stars at amazon.com

Book cover for Time Trap by J.T. Bock, a sci-fi romance edited vy Romance Refined editor Rachel Daven Skinner. Image of 2 bodies in white silhouette falling through the air against a pink background of a swirling vortex.
TimeTrap
​J.T. Bock​

Sci-fi/Fantasy Romance
Self-pub Apr 2018

​Hired by author for substantive and line editing

4.6 stars at amazon.com

Book cover for NSFW by Piper Lawson, a new adult romance edited by Romance Refined editor Rachel Daven Skinner. Image of a man in a suit embracing a woman from behind.
NSFW
​Piper Lawson

New Adult
Self-pub Oct 2017
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​Hired by author for substantive editing

4.3 stars at amazon.com

Book cover for Dissent by Katy Haye, a sci-fi romance book edited by Romance Refined editor Rachel Daven Skinner. Book cover shows a young man looking into the distance as a comet streaks across the sky of a mysterious looking world.

​Dissent
​Katy Haye

YA Sci-fi Romance
Self-pub Apr 2017

Hired by author for substantive editing
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4.8 stars at amazon.com

Book cover for Fake Fiancee by Ilsa Madden-Mills, a new adult romance book edited by Romance Refined editor Rachel Daven Skinner. Book cover shows a muscled man with long hair staring into the distance.
Fake Fiancée
Ilsa Madden-Mills
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New Adult
Self-pub Feb 2017

​Hired by author for line and copy editing

4.5 stars amazon.com

​​​NYT, USA Today, WSJ, and Amazon bestselling author

Book cover for Styled by Piper Lawson, a new adult romance book edited by Romance Refined editor Rachel Daven Skinner. Book cover shows couple embracing
Styled
​Piper Lawson

New Adult
Self-pub Mar 2017
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​Hired by author for substantive editing

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4.4 stars at amazon.com

Book cover for Sealed by Piper Lawson, a new adult romance book edited by Romance Refined editor Rachel Daven Skinner. Book cover shows a couple embracing.

​Sealed
​Piper Lawson

New Adult
Self-pub Jan 2017
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​Hired by author for substantive editing

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​4.4 stars at amazon.com

Book cover for Discord by Katy Haye, a sci-fi young adult romance book edited by Romance Refined editor Rachel Daven Skinner. Book cover shows a young woman staring at a comet about to hit Earth.
Discord
Katy Haye

YA Sci-fi Romance
Self-pub Dec 2016

Hired by author for substantive editing

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4.6 stars at amazon.com

Book cover for Dama X by J.T. Bock, a sci-fi romance book edited by Romance Refined editor Rachel Daven Skinner. Book cover shows an illustration of a woman's face painted to look like a sugar skull
​Dama X
​J.T. Bock​

Sci-fi/Fantasy Romance
Self-pub Jul 2016

​Hired by author for manuscript critique and line and copy editing

4.9 stars at amazon.com

book cover for Filthy English by Ilsa Madden-Mills, a book edited by Romance Refined editor Rachel Daven Skinner. book cover shows a shirtless man with a few tattoos standing in front of a dirty British flag
Filthy English
Ilsa Madden-Mills
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New Adult
Self-pub Jul 2016

Hired by author for substantive editing


​4.6 stars amazon.com

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NYT, USA Today, WSJ, and Amazon bestselling author

book cover for Rising Tides by Katy Haye, a book edited by Romance Refined editor Rachel Daven Skinner. Book cover shows a young woman standing in front of a the sea
Rising Tides
Katy Haye 

YA Sci-fi Romance
Self-pub Jun 2016

Hired by author for substantive editing


​4.6 stars amazon.com

2017 InD'tale RONE Winner for YA Paranormal

book cover for The Promise by A.B. Michaels, a book edited by Romance Refined editor Rachel Daven Skinner. Book cover shows an embracing couple and a tent city
The Promise
A.B. Michaels
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Historical Romance
Self-pub Jun 2016

Hired by author for substantive, line, and copy editing
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​4.4 stars amazon.com

book cover for The Depth of Beauty by A.B. Michaels, a book edited by Romance Refined editor Rachel Daven Skinner. book cover shows a woman's back, bare except for a strand of black pearls trailing down to her tailbone. A Chinese building is in the background

​The Depth of Beauty
A.B. Michaels

Historical Romance
Self-pub Jan 2015
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Hired by author for substantive, line, and copy editing

4.3 stars amazon.com

2017 RITA finalist

Book cover for Wherever You Go Were You Are by Randa Flannery, a book edited by Romance Refined editor Rachel Daven Skinner. Book cover shows an illustration of a couple standing next to a pond, and in the reflection the woman is shown to be a werewolf

​Wherever You Go, Were You Are Randa Flannery

​Paranormal Romance
​Icasm Press Dec 2015

​Hired by publisher for substantive editing

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4.7 stars amazon.com

Book cover for Stripped by Piper Lawson, a book edited by Romance Refined editor Rachel Daven Skinner. A man embraces a woman with his hand on the zipper at the back of her dress.

​Stripped
Piper Lawson

New Adult
Self-pub Dec 2015
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​Hired by author for substantive editing

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​4.5 stars amazon.com

Book cover for What Rosie Found Next by Helen J Rolfe, a book edited by Romance Refined editor Rachel Daven Skinner. A pretty white house is set among trees and gardens while a couple in silhouette stand near each other.
What Rosie Found Next
Helen J. Rolfe

Contemp. Romance
Self-pub Nov 2015 

​Hired by author for substantive, line, and copy editing

4.7 ​​​stars amazon.co.uk

Book cover for The Last Gatekeeper by Katy Haye, a book edited by Romance Refined editor Rachel Daven Skinner. Silhouette of a woman's face dividing two alien landscapes, one a desert and one a frozen tundra.
The Last Dreamseer
​Katy Haye

YA Fantasy
Self-pub Nov 2015

Hired by author for substantive editing


​4.7 stars amazon.com

Testimonial: 
​"Quality and service are unequalled!"

Book cover for Dirty English by Ilsa Madden-Mills, a book edited by Romance Refined editor Rachel Daven Skinner. Image of a man's very muscular back as he faces a dirty British flag.
​Dirty English
Ilsa Madden-Mills
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New Adult
Self-pub Oct 2015

​Hired by author for substantive, line, and copy editing


4.5 stars amazon.com

​NYT, USA Today, WSJ, and Amazon bestselling author

#1 on Amazon in multiple categories and #8 in the
 Wall Street Journal

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Book cover for Love the One You're Witch for Randa Flannery, a book edited by Romance Refined editor Rachel Daven Skinner. Cartoon illustration of a pretty witch holding a broom while standing in front of a spooky house and a large moon in the sky
Love the One You're Witch  Randa Flannery

​Paranormal Romance
​Icasm Press Oct 2015

​Hired by publisher for substantive editing


​4.7 stars amazon.com

book cover for Missing by Randa Flannery, a book edited by Romance Refined editor Rachel Daven Skinner.
Missing
Randa Flannery

​Romantic Suspense
​Icasm Press Jul 2015
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​Hired by publisher for substantive and line editing

​4.6 stars amazon.com

book cover for Handle Me with Care by Helen J Rolfe, a book edited by Romance Refined editor Rachel Daven Skinner. Illustration of a couple sitting on a bench looking at a city skyline at dusk

​Handle Me with Care
Helen J. Rolfe

Contemp. Romance
Self-pub Jun 2015 
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​Hired by author for line and copy editing
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​4.7 stars amazon.co.uk

book cover for The Lair by A.B. Michaels, a book edited by Romance Refined editor Rachel Daven Skinner. Part of a woman's face is seen above a distant view of an Italian villa
The Lair by
​A.B. Michaels

Romantic Suspense
Self-pub Jun 2015
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​Hired by author for substantive, line, and copy editing

4.5 stars amazon.com
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Finalist for the 2015 USA Best Book Awards
Medalist for the 2015 New Apple Book Awards in Thriller/Suspense

book cover for Schooled by Piper Lawson, a book edited by Romance Refined editor Rachel Daven Skinner. Book cover shows a close-up of a young man and woman about to kiss

​Schooled
Piper Lawson

New Adult
Self-pub May 2015
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Hired by author for substantive, line, and copy editing

4.1 stars amazon.com

book cover for The Australian by Lesley Young, a book edited by Romance Refined editor Rachel Daven Skinner. Book cover shows an embracing couple overlaid with an image of a freeway heading into a city

​The Australian
Lesley Young

Romantic Suspense
Self-pub Mar 2015

Hired by author for line and copy editing


​4.2 stars
amazon.com

book cover for Very Twisted Things by Ilsa Madden-Mills, a book edited by Romance Refined editor Rachel Daven Skinner. A shirtless young man has his arms raised and resting behind his head while he looks pensive
Very Twisted Things
Ilsa Madden-Mills

New Adult
Self-pub Feb 2015

Hired by author for substantive, line, and copy editing

4.6 stars amazon.com
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Hit #70 on Amazon's Top 100 Paid Kindle Store Bestsellers list

book cover for The Frenchman by Lesley Young, a book edited by Romance Refined editor Rachel Daven Skinner. Book cover shows an embracing couple overlaid with a night view of the road leading to the Arc de Triumph
The Frenchman
Lesley Young

Romantic Suspense 
Self-pub Dec 2014

Hired by author for line and copy editing
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​4.3 stars amazon.com

book cover for The Last Gatekeeper by Katy Haye, a book edited by Romance Refined editor Rachel Daven Skinner. Book covers shows the silhouette of a woman's face diving two landscapes, one of green pastures and one of red desert
The Last Gatekeeper
Katy Haye

YA Fantasy
Self-pub Nov 2014

Hired by author for substantive, line, and copy editing

4.5 stars amazon.com

B.R.A.G. Medallion Honoree

book cover for Never let Go by Anne Carol, a book edited by Romance Refined editor Rachel Daven Skinner. Cover shows a young couple embracing while lying in the grass looking lovingly into each other's eyes
Never Let Go
Anne Carol

Contemp. Romance
Self-pub Nov 2014

Hired by author for substantive, line, and copy editing

4.7 stars amazon.com

book cover for Sinner's Grove by A.B. Michaels, a book edited by Romance Refined editor Rachel Daven Skinner. Book cover shows a woman's face above a tree-lined rocky bay

​Sinner's Grove
A.B. Michaels

Romantic Suspense
Self-pub Sept 2014

Hired by author for substantive, line, and copy editing

4.6 stars amazon.com

Finalist for the 2014 Linda Howard Award of Excellence

Finalist for the 2015 North American Book Awards

book cover for Very Wicked Things by Ilsa Madden-Mills, a book edited by Romance Refined editor Rachel Daven Skinner. Book cover shows a young woman in a dress and high heels sitting on the ground holding ballet slippers
Very Wicked Things
Ilsa Madden-Mills

New Adult
Self-pub May 2014

Hired by author for substantive editing
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4.5 stars amazon.com

​hit #83 on Amazon's Top 100 Paid Kindle Store Bestsellers list
hit #36 on the Indie Author News Top 50 Indie list

book cover for Very Wicked Beginnings by Ilsa Madden-Mills, a book edited by Romance Refined editor Rachel Daven Skinner. Book cover shows a shirtless young man looking pensive
Very Wicked Beginnings 
Ilsa Madden-Mills

New Adult
Self-pub May 2014

​Hired by author for line and copy editing


​4.5 stars amazon.com

book cover for The Art of Love by A.B. Michaels, a book edited by Romance Refined editor Rachel Daven Skinner. Book cover shows an embracing couple and a stately house

​The Art of Love
A.B. Michaels

​Historical Romance
Self-pub May 2014

Hired by author for substantive, line, and copy editing

4.6 stars amazon.com

Medalist for the 2015 New Apple Book Awards in Romance, 2016 Silver IPPY

Hit # 2 on Amazon's Top 100 free Historicals list

book cover for Follow a Star by Christine Stovell, a book edited by Romance Refined editor Rachel Daven Skinner. Book cover shows a woman standing on a beach and staring at the sunset as stars come out
Follow a Star
Christine Stovell

Contemp. Romance
​Choc Lit July 2014

​​Hired by publisher for substantive, line, and copy editing

4.5 stars amazon.co.uk

book cover for The Maid of Milan by Beverley Eikli, a book edited by Romance Refined editor Rachel Daven Skinner. Book cover shows a young woman in a ballgown who's holding a fan and looking coy. Italy in the background.
The Maid of Milan
Beverley Eikli

Historical Romance
​Choc Lit Mar 2014
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Hired by publisher for substantive, line, and copy editing​

4.7 stars amazon.co.uk

Nominated for  AusRomToday's Book of the Year

book cover for Impossible Things by Kate Johnson, a book edited by Romance Refined editor Rachel Daven Skinner. Book cover shows a close-up of a woman's face surrounded by a purple shawl. She has tattoos around one eye.
Impossible Things
Kate Johnson

Fantasy
​Choc Lit Feb 2014

​Hired by publisher for substantive, line, and copy editing

4.5 stars amazon.co.uk

book cover for Dangerous Decisions by Margaret Kaine, a book edited by Romance Refined editor Rachel Daven Skinner. Book cover shows a woman looking out over a lake.
Dangerous Decisions 
Margaret Kaine
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Historical Romance
Choc Lit Dec 2016

​Hired by publisher for substantive, line, and copy editing

4.8 stars amazon.co.uk

Nominated for InD'tale's 2014 RONE award in the Historical Post Medieval category

book cover for Close to the Wind by Zana Bell, a book edited by Romance Refined editor Rachel Daven Skinner. Book cover shows a woman in a gown and a large sailing ship on the sea under moonlight
Close to the Wind 
Zana Bell

Historical Romance
​Choc Lit Oct 2013

Hired by publisher for substantive, line, and copy editing

4.5 stars amazon.co.uk

4.5 stars from RT Book Reviews

book cover for The Reluctant Bride by Beverley Eikli, a book edited by Romance Refined editor Rachel Daven Skinner. Book cover shows a woman in a ballgown standing in front of elaborate English gardens and a manor house in the distance
The Reluctant Bride by Beverley Eikli

Historical Fiction
Choc Lit Sept 2013

Hired by publisher for substantive, line, and copy editing
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4.5 stars amazon.com

​Shortlisted for the Australian Romance Readers Association's 2013 Favourite Historical Romance Award
Nominated for InD'tale's 2014 RONE award in the Historical Post Medieval category

book cover for A Bargain Struck by Liz Harris, a book edited by Romance Refined editor Rachel Daven Skinner. Book cover shows a silhouette of a woman and a horse standing near a wagon wheel
 A Bargain Struck 
Liz Harris

​Historical Romance
Choc Lit Sept 2013

​Hired by publisher for substantive, line, and copy editing

4.5 stars amazon.co.uk

The Daily Mail (print and online) calls it a "vivid portrayal"; shortlisted for the 2014 RoNA Historical Romantic Novel of the Year award; shortlisted for the 2013 Festival of Romance Reader Award for Best Historical Read chosen by Red Hot Books for Shelly's list of Top 2013 Reads

Book cover for New England Rocks by Christina Courtenay, a book edited by Romance Refined editor Rachel Daven Skinner. Book cover shows a teen girl looking pensive
New England Rocks
Christina Courtenay

YA
Choc Lit Aug 2013

​Hired by publisher for substantive, line, and copy editing

4.8 stars amazon.co.uk

Shortlisted for the 2014 RoNA Young Adult Romantic Novel of the Year award

book cover for Beneath an Irish Sky by Isabella Connor, a book edited by Romance Refined editor Rachel Daven Skinner. Book cover shows an gypsy wagon in a lush meadow
Beneath an Irish Sky
Isabella Connor

Contemp. Romance
Choc Lit Aug 2013

Hired by publisher for substantive, line, and copy editing

4.7 stars amazon.co.uk

Book cover for The Elephant Girl by Henriette Gyland, a book edited by Romance Refined editor Rachel Daven Skinner. Book cover shows an Indian-style elephant pendant set atop an Indian-patterned cloth
The Elephant Girl
Henriette Gyland

Romantic Mystery
Choc Lit Jul 2013

​Hired by publisher for substantive, line, and copy editing

4.6 stars amazon.co.uk

Made the cover of August's Booktime magazine, one of the UK's leading sources for independent bookshop ordering, with a two-page internal spread

Chosen by Red Hot Books for Jaimie's list of Top 2013 Reads

book cover for The Wedding Diary by Margaret James, a book edited by Romance Refined editor Rachel Daven Skinner. Book cover shows a drawing of whimsical butterflies aglow.
The Wedding Diary
Margaret James 

Contemp. Romance
Choc Lit May 2013

​Hired by publisher for substantive, line, and copy editing

​4.6 stars amazon.co.uk

Shortlisted for the 2014 RoNA Romantic Comedy Novel of the Year award

book cover for Hubble Bubble by Jane Lovering, a book edited by Romance Refined editor Rachel Daven Skinner. Book cover shows a drawing of a witch's cauldron surrounded by objects for a spell
Hubble Bubble
Jane Lovering

Contemp. Romance
Choc Lit Jun 2013

​Hired by publisher for substantive, line, and copy editing

​4.3 stars amazon.co.uk

Shortlisted for the 2013 Festival of Romance Reader Award for Best Romantic Read

Copyedit only – Choc Lit

book cover for Up Close by Henriette Gyland, a book copyedited by Romance Refined editor Rachel Daven Skinner
book cover for Darcie's Dilemma by Sue Moorcroft, a book copyedited by Romance Refined editor Rachel Daven Skinner
book cover for Evie Undercover by Liz Harris, a book copyedited by Romance Refined editor Rachel Daven Skinner
book cover for Once Bitten Twice Shy by Christina Courtenay, a book copyedited by Romance Refined editor Rachel Daven Skinner
book cover for Marry in Haste by Christina Courtenay, a book copyedited by Romance Refined editor Rachel Daven Skinner

Proofread only – Choc Lit

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*For an explanation of what was involved with each type of edit, please see my Types of editing page. Substantive edits for publisher Choc Lit also included factoring in feedback from their Tasting Panel.

You could compile the worst book in the world entirely out of selected passages from the best writers in the world.”
― G.K. Chesterton
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